Firstly, the quote was changed because within our group we agreed a more intellectual quote would be more effective. We also changed the name of the newspaper that quoted the song because The Guardian is stereotypically read by those more intellectual people.
Secondly, we changed the stars. We created our own star using a different application and then inserted and duplicated the star in order to make the rating more obvious to the viewer. The bold yellow colour which is used to fill the star is the only bright colour on the page, and for this reason makes the stars stand out to the viewer and the colour helps to catch the corner of their eye.
Thirdly, we added a link to the official Michael Jackson website. We made this text smaller as it is less important to advertise the CD but it informs the reader that they could find out more information by visiting the website.
Finally, a slight change in the position of the parental advisory image to the bottom right hand corner. We made this change because we felt that it was still necessary to have this image on the poster so that the listeners are aware of the explicit content but it shouldn't be next to the text as it could be misleading and viewers may think that the explicit content was on the poster.
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